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post #1 of 9 (permalink) Old 03-03-2004, 03:03 PM Thread Starter
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Hey all, I wrote a story for a class assignment last semester. Let me know what you all think:

http://more.sportbikes.com/ezine/art...p?articleId=72

Thanks to sportbikes for letting me post it!

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post #2 of 9 (permalink) Old 03-03-2004, 03:08 PM
 
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nice job, man.....good piece.
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Nice story jester. It sounds exactly like what happend to me when I sat on my first bike. Except for the fact that it was completely different. Nice story though.

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excellent
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it read like a commercial but it was still a good read.

SQUID=Stupidly Quick, Underdressed, & Imminently Dead

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it read like a commercial but it was still a good read.
You know it would make a good advertisement for a sportbike, ahh, maybe a Zuki.

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You know it would make a good advertisement for a sportbike, ahh, maybe a Zuki.

Only if the story had ended with the rider in last place!

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You know it would make a good advertisement for a sportbike, ahh, maybe a Zuki.
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Only if the story had ended with the rider in last place!
Or with the rider drop-kicking the rider he crashed into.

Good story, Jester. It definitely has me wanting to ride.

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post #9 of 9 (permalink) Old 03-08-2004, 11:04 AM
 
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Excellant story! Pretty much describes how I feel every time I sit on mine and prepare for a ride!
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